KEN is looking forward to hearing your thoughts on MID LANCS AT LAWSONS FIELD
OLIVER The runner is well placed, however the sporadic spectators in the background are a distraction taking my eye from the main subject.
TILLMAN I think this lacks a little drama, could look more striking as a print though. Not convinced the single runner is strong enough in such a big space.
DIANNE I like the figure with her feet off the ground but I spent some time trying to identify the runners/people in the background. the composition needs playing with to move the focal point to the runner.
KEAN I think the composition is good here but I find the background to be too distracting. The treatment of the background looks a little strange to me. I would definitely remove the red from the person on the left.
CHRIS E I find the figures in the background very distracting. I wonder if it would be more powerful cropped to portrait/square.
GORDON Picked out the runner extremely well, and I like the idea of the spectators in the background as it adds context and perspective to the image.Lighting and the sky very well handled.