BERNARD is looking forward to your comments on MALE SPARROWHAWK.
Taken in the garden, grab shot though the window. He calls most nights sometimes with it’s prey.
OLIVER The shape of the image has been captured well, however I find the the panning /’motion blur’ all over the image (apart from the lead cyclists face) a bit disconcerting?
TILLMAN Composition is good, but it does need some work on the tonal levels as already suggested.
GORDON The perch is just too light, other wise its ok
CHRIS E Eyes and beak are sharp, feet are sharp and the feathers look soft just as feathers should – which is all fine. I’d desaturate the greens just a tad and take a bit off the left edge to make him look bigger.