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The natural colour tones add to the portrait and he draws you in to the image. The fact he doesn’t have eye contact doesn’t bother me. Lighten his face a little or darken down the pale green to balance out the image.
The only comment I would make is that the light green background to the right I would make the same shade as the LHS
I feel the face and clothing is just a bit on the dark side (not in a Star Wars way!) so the image doesn’t have the impact it could have. Super expression, well captured.
The revised version is far more striking.
The revised version is a great improvement
Like the revised version, shows what can be done with a few tweaks.
Well worth the time to get the new version looking good.
Second image works better – thanks
Now that works, has a far more impact (second Image )