DIANNE The position of the figure works well with the line of the fan but you loose the detail in the arms/gloves being dark against the background. you could lighten it a little to contrast between the two stronger.
GORDON Like the lighting on the figure and the pose, which works well but as Dianne says lost detail in the glove on the RHS , lost in the background.
CHRIS E Has a lot of promise if the lost detail is retrievable.
TILLMAN A bit sombre overall for me, but the shape is good.